
Tis a spell I cast on thee
Tis a spell I cast on thee
On this night for begging sweets
On this night for begging sweets
This night tis a spell for sweets
I cast on thee begging on
With sugar and spice, oh so nice
With sugar and spice, oh so nice
Screams and wails, and scary tales
Screams and wails, and scary tales
Sugar tales, spice wails, and so nice
And screams scary, with oh … and -
Add a dash of this, a dabble of that
Add a dash of this, a dabble of that
Eye of newt and of chicken fat
Eye of newt and chicken fat
Dash that eye this fat dabble add
Of a chicken of and of a newt of
Spell I cast, oh screams and wails,
Tis on this night of dabble eye
Sugar of a newt, with begging tales
A nice fat chicken of scary add
And for a sweet and spice
Dash this and that on thee so
This was a prompt from dVerse. The prompt was to create a paradelle. Go to the link to read the background of paradelle, which is rather interesting and funny. But the rules of a paradelle are:
Here are the rules:
The Paradelle is a 4-stanza poem, where each stanza consists of 6 lines.
First Three Stanzas:
The first two lines as well as the third and fourth lines of the first three stanzas must be the same (repeat). Where it begins to get difficult and become more of a poetic puzzle is when reaching fifth and sixth lines. These lines must contain all the words from the preceding four lines within the stanza using them only once to form completely new lines.
Last Stanza:
For the most difficult piece of this poetic puzzle, the final stanza of the paradelle does not repeat like the preceding stanzas, rather the final six lines must contain every word from the first three stanzas, and only those words, again using them only once to form completely new lines.
The Design is simple:Stanza 1: 1, 1, 2, 2, 3, 4
Stanza 2: 5, 5, 6, 6, 7, 8
Stanza 3: 9, 9, 10, 10, 11, 12
Stanza 4: 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18
This was harder than it looks. And it wasn’t the greatest but I can live with it. 😁
Fantastic, Stuart – I really like how you ended the poem with ‘so’ – well done, Sir!
~David
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Thanks David! I wasn’t so happy with the so, so I’m glad to see somebody enjoyed it. 😁 Glad you liked it!
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This was fun!
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Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed. 😊
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Great Halloween poetry. 🙂
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Thank you! 😊 Glad you liked it.
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What a Halloween night treat as with a dash and a dabble it casts quite the spell, a mixture of “scream” and “spice”! A pleasure to read. 🎃
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So glad you enjoyed! A dash and dabble, toil and trouble. Makes for a tasty treat. 😁
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That was quite the spell I can see a cauldron bubbling.
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Ooops, that means I need to turn the heat down. 😂 Thanks for the read and the compliment.
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This is such a witchy fun spell catchy paradelle. Love the “recipe” of sugar, spice, eye of newt and chicken fat. It all comes together for a dish for Halloween. Thanks for joining in our challenging poetry form.
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My pleasure. And it was a challenge. lol Thanks for the suggestion. Hope you had a good Halloween, full of sugar and less so of newt eyes.
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You had me laughing at this fun recipe… and I pretty sure the little tricksters will not return after such a spell (not to mention the newts)
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Newts are what give it a kick. 😉😂 Glad to make you laugh.
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Stew, I found your paradelle humorous with the bits and bobs. Happy Halloween.
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Thank you! I hope it made you smile. :^) Happy Halloween.
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You’re welcome and it did 🙂
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