
Eyes watch me, they’re inside
Opinions and judgements. Attempts to understand
Do you see me? Look, here I am!
I have my dark side and my light too
Storms thunder yet the sun shines
Chasing modesty, underwater I swam.
Awaken from my blanket of discarded decoration
Flowers in bloom, birds do sing,
I wonder what those who are watching think?
What do you see when you look at me?
Do you wonder why I look downcast?
Are you willing to go to the depths that I sink?
Their eyes are a tattoo along my side feelings of bedlam
They look me over, water on a hot day, a long cold drink
Little do they know they’ve etched their way into my soul like dried ink
I am who they think I am but not at all in that way. I am their slaughtered lamb.
A prompt from dVerse. Write a poem inspired or describing the picture above. See the prompt blog page here.
“Eyes watch me, they’re inside
Opinions and judgements…. I am their slaughtered lamb.”
That happens when we listen to those voices. I too love the eyes as tattoo.
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It’s funny how other’s opinions can get under your skin to become our own tattoos. Thank you for the kind words!
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“What do you see when you look at me?
Do you wonder why I look downcast?
Are you willing to go to the depths that I sink?”
Love this! Stunning response to the prompt 💙💙
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Thank you!
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Love the way you describe that gaze, and the also what you cannot see (the turmoil underneath)..
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Thank you!
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Your ekphrastic is amazing!!! Love how you used eyes as tattoos, so clever.
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Thank you!
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WOW! A wonderful ekphrastic poem for the image! I especially like these lines:
“I have my dark side and my light too
Storms thunder yet the sun shines”
and these
“Little do they know they’ve etched their way into my soul like dried ink”
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it.
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Each critical look is received with a contemplative cry and is woven “bedlam”-style into the inked tapestry of a self. Finely imagined and sadly wrought.
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Thank you!
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