
Bang
It goes
Against the wall
Shattered pieces
Broken
Bang
Loud crash
I couldn’t bear
To hear screams
Bouncing around
Echoes
Toy
With me
My emotions empty
My words meaningless
Syllables of
Nothing
Drum
Into my
Pounding, pulsing brain
Angry cries
love
Misfit Toy
Another dVerse Quadrille prompt, this time you must write a poem of exactly 44 words including the word “bang”. Hope you enjoy!
A real tension here, it reads almost like a play.
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Thank you! I hope that increased the enjoyment of reading it.
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Oh! This is a very compelling Q. I love how you have formatted it.
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Thank you very much!
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Your formatting lends power to your poem. Some relationships are just like that, leaving pain but also relief when they finally end.
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The brokenness of it all; I agree. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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I too found this a creative take on the prompt. Nicely done.
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Thanks. 😊 Glad you liked it.
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A very creative poem!
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Thank you! 😊
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