So we have arrived
A estas alturas
And have come of age
A estas alturas
At this place and time
A estas alturas
To this single space
Was it by His hand?
¿Divina providencia?
Or perhaps fate?
No. Divina providencia.
That guided us to this land;
God’s country.
Divina providencia.
How was I to know?
Un inocente
She shouldn’t have been there
Un inocente
It’s not my fault I swear
Un inocente
She’ll get better
Un inocente
Ladies and gentlemen of the jury
We have come to this place
To hand down judgement
Innocent or guilty
Divina providencia, un inocente
A estas altura o
Para siempre
This was from a dVerse prompt: Use one (or more) of the italicized Spanish words from the Cisneros poem above and incorporate it into your own original poem. I chose to use the words/phrases a estas altura, divina providencia and un inocente. I hope you enjoyed!
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echoing what others say, my echoes getting lost in the wide, stark image that you’ve shared…
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You made the spanish coming in so natural in this poem… it has all that I feel that all that it misses for being a great spanish song is the word corazon
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Yeah the Spanish really flowed which was a bit surprising at first but it worked well. I wonder if I can get Carlos Santana to buy the rights and make a song? 😂
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Great use of Spanish words and phrases and repetition, Stew!
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Thanks Kim! I think the repetition really worked well. 🙌🏾
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You’re most welcome, Stew.
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What an effective use of the Spanish vocabulary, Stew, its ominous repetition like a drumbeat! What seems to begin as a saga morphs into a landscape of judgement for a crime, whatever it is, committed on an innocent, the verdict, seemingly all too clear.
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Than you! 😊 It is a journey and I think the repetition really sets it off. I’m glad it came together the way it did at the end.
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I love what you did with this one. Yes, I believe we are all here by divine providence!
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Thank you! 🙏🏾 We are all directed to a place, how well we follow directions is another matter entirely.
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yes!
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This has it all–heart, heartache, language, and sweetness. I love it.
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Thank you so much. I’m glad all those came through for you. 😊
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