
I see her
She’s shining like the dawn
A celestial body fiery hot
I touch her
Blowing dandelion
Soft, gentle, brushing over her skin
I taste her
Her essence like raindrops
A kiss most intimate on my lips
I love her
Animalistic heat
Passionate howls of wolves in the night
This is from a dVerse prompt:
And so for this MTB challenge we are writing as per the poetry form devised by Karan Naidu, which he called a Parallelogram de Crystalline (apparently dedicated to his soulmate, Crystal Rose)
Poetry Rules: Despite the titular length it is quite simple and short!
• 12 lines in total (each Capitalised but without punctuation)
• 4 verses
• 3 lines per verse
• syllable count per verse 3,6,9
• unrhymed
Poetry Theme: the beauty of a (real or imaginary) lover as compared with and described in images of nature.
(Crystalline literally means very clear or bright, therefore, keep the complementary images crisp.)
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The howling of a wolf… how wonderful
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Thanks Bjorn. Oooowwoooo! 😄
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Such rising passion stanza by stanza…
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Thank you! Rising passion is a good thing. haha
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I love how you used the actions of a lover to begin each stanza – so intense too from dandelions to wolves
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Thank you! I thought it was a good way to get 3 syllables. 😁
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I like how you started each line in the first person, Stew, and especially love the second stanza.
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Thank you Kim! So glad you liked it.
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You’re welcome, Stew.
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