
Stiff lines and harsh brush strokes
The impression of a summer’s day
Green for trees upswept by the breeze
Along the river blue and white
Reflections in the water show bare branches
Winter's chill beneath the surface
Behind the green of a summer day
Alone on a boat
Sits a man in a coat
Hat on his head
With doors open
Does he see the summer trees above
Or the winter branches reflected below
Or are his eyes instead focused inside
Reflecting
This is a poem for the dVerse prompt:
So, for my prompt today you have two options.
You may write an ekphrastic poem inspired by Claude Monet’s “The Studio Boat.” Your poem does not need to include anything about reflecting or reflections, but it can. AND/OR
You may write a poem on reflection, whatever that means to you—self-reflection, reflection on time’s passing, a reflection in a pool of water, etc.
I chose to do a bit of both. Hope you enjoy! 😊
It is the internal journey that matters most… a place to that is a blessing
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To find that place where you can make an inward journey is what counts.
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”Sits a man in a coat”
I like this line. I like it because ultimately in most paintings and in most poetry, the responsibility for the art rests with a single person. I like how you’ve isolated the painter in the stanza. That’s very sharp. Thank you very much.
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Thank you very much for your comments. I really enjoyed your observations. 😊
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Thank you very much. It is a very fine poem.
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It is interesting to ponder what he saw, and/or what he chose to paint. A wonderful observation!
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I think that’s one of the great things about art, written or visual. You get to put yourself in the place of the artist and ask why?
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Yes, that’s true.
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I found myself drawn into your ekphrastic poem in the same way as the painting drew me in, towards the centre of image and poem. I love the wat you did that with rhyme in:
‘Alone on a boat
Sits a man in a coat’.
The final question got me thinking…reflecting.
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Always a good piece when it can get the reader to think. Thank you Kim! I like the image of being drawn to the centre of the poem and painting.
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It’s a pleasure, Stew.
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