
How do I love you?
How could I not?
I love by my actions
By my thoughts and words
The beats of my heart
How do you love me?
How could you not?
What are your actions?
Do you think of me? Speak of me?
How does your heartbeat change
At the mention of my name?
He stood there a question on his face
How could he do such a thing?
Yet how could he not?
His actions betrayed him
As did his words and thoughts
His heart raced as he saw her
How do we love each other?
Could we really be apart?
We love by being together
You finish my thought and my sentences
Our hearts beat as one
They love each other don’t they?
I mean how could they not?
See how they are with each other
They’re practically one, finishing each others thoughts
They are the alternating beats of one heart.
This poem is for a prompt from dVerse: “So today I would like you to challenge yourself and try to write from a different perspective or maybe even several perspectives than what you normally do.
You can do this by either writing something totally new or if you prefer, take an old perspective written from for instance first person singular and change it to third person.”
I couldn’t think of what perspective to write from. I usually write from first or third, though I’ve done second a bit and even third plural. Those have all been done in prose writing mostly. But the thought of taking one piece and switching the perspective intrigued me so I figured I’d do one stanza in each perspective. That is what you got. I hope you enjoy!
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This was fantastic! I love how you kept the questions persistent with the changing perspectives. Nicely done!
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Thanks so much! It was a fun write. I enjoyed it!
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The shift in perspective is so effective…. and maybe most useful when we are in love…. to see how we seem to other (if possible)
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Thanks Bjorn! I agree if only it was so easy to see how other’s see us, especially those we love.
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Nicely done, Stew, with a clever shift, especially in these lines:
‘We love by being together
You finish my thought and my sentences
Our hearts beat as one’
to
‘See how they are with each other
They’re practically one, finishing each others thoughts
They are the alternating beats of one heart.’
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Thanks Kim! It’s amazing what changing perspectives does to the poem. ❤
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Love the shifting
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed
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It is interesting, the juxtaposition from first to third person……….very cool.
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I found the different perspectives interesting. Thank you for reading!
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