
Whirly twirly little spin
Round and round it goes again
Where it stops I don’t know
Why the whirly thing goes
In the direction it does
I don’t know the reason for it’s cause
Causation situation a whirlpool of cessation
Just likes to spin
This was for a dVerse prompt – Just pen us a poem of precisely 44 words, not counting the title, and using some form of the word whirl.
It started out as a couplet then kind of spun out of control, which kind of rather fit the theme of whirl so I just went with it. 😁 Hope you enjoy!
Love the playful spin of this, Stuart — that “causation situation” really makes it whirl!
~David
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Whatever happened to spinning tops? I don’t seem to see them around any more, not for a long time. (Maybe I just don’t have enough little kids in my life.)
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I’m sure they’re out there but probably not as prevalent. Maybe an AI top connected to the Internet? 😂
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LOL
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A whirl of a read, Stew!
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Thanks Dora! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 😁
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I like all those “tion” words in the second to last line. 😉
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Thank you. You have my appreciation for your consideration. 😂
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You put a nice spin to whirl
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Thanks Bjorn. It was a fun go around. 😁
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Fun poem I love the spinning “Causation situation a whirlpool of cessation” line
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Thank you! It seems to be a popular line. lol
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I enjoyed it. 😀
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I’m glad! 😁 Thank you
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My pleasure. 😀
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