Granites and Schists

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“Behold! The granites and schists of my dark and stubborn country,” said Igor, looking out of the window at the crowd below.

I looked at Svetlana. 

“The people are dumb as rocks,” she explained. She rolled her eyes and slumped onto the couch. 

“And twice as stubborn!” yelled Igor, turning away from the window, “They should be revolting! Burning cars in the street! Cursing the plutocracy. Readying themselves to rise up to their destiny!”

“And instead they watch as the modern equivalent of chariots and gladiators roll by,” I offered.

“No. Instead they line up to watch an orange clown paraded in front of them like some sad court jester. And as they laugh behind their hands the jester has led the enemy through the gates of the castle,” spat Igor.

“You have forgotten who your people are,” remarked Svetlana.

“Da. Granites and schists.”


This was for a prompt from dVerse: Write a piece of prose, fiction or non-fiction, up to 144-words, using the given line. The line:

“The granites and schists
Of my dark and stubborn country.”

I hope you enjoy!

Published by authorstew

C. Stuart Lewis creates poems with feeling, intelligence and sex appeal. His short stories and books focus on characters that feel real in real world situations. Originally from the United States he now resides in Ontario, Canada. Check out his webpage at TheAuthorStew.ca

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