
Cold as a witch’s teat
The phrase never made sense to me
But the white powdery snow made for a pretty scene
White as a lamb’s wool
I suppose if you kept it inside
The snow lay upon the ground like a baby’s blanket
Quiet as a church mouse
The winter landscape
Muted by flakes of snow piled one upon the other
Everything stopped in its tracks
More like hiding inside
Forced to sit and stay, quiet contemplation on a winter’s day
This was for a dVerse prompt: write about snow as you see, feel or imagine it, in any form you wish, using clear imagery as crisp as fresh-fallen snow. I hope you enjoy!
Totally agree, I love the silence it brings and yes an excuse to not go anywhere. Great poem!
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Thank you so much! Snow days can be good days. 😊
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Love how you chose to rhyme at the end — wrapped up the poem very nicely!
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Thank you! I’m glad that it came together that way. 😊
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I love how you weaved all those well known idioms into something new.
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Thanks Bjorn! I like to try to put a new spin on the familiar. 😊
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I love all the similes in your snow day, Stew, and the final stanza resonated with me – it’s exactly what I do on snow days.
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Thanks Kim! I know that’s what a lot of us would like to do when we see snow. lol 😄
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You’re most welcome, Stew,
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Beautiful winter poem
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Thank you! 😊
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Love the similes you used … the poem made me smile, broadly.
CHEERS.
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Thanks so much Helen. A poem that brings a smile is worth it’s weight in gold. 😉😁
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