
In a word
Or two
Just the sight of you
I can’t believe
Just you and me
The flowering trees
Bloom, fragrant as sunshine
As loud as the rolling seas
Crash into me
Make me move
The beating of your heart
The whole not just a part
Seems as such
That there is
Nothing missing
When I’m with you
This is from a dVerse prompt: Today we’re going to write in only phrases. The style and format of poem is up to you. I hope you enjoy. 😊
Lots of lovely internal and off rhymes hidden in here so that it reads very nicely. Well done 👏
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… love is the best!
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Isn’t it though? 😁😍 Thanks for reading!
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I think there are some sentences hiding between the phrases but who can argue with love?!
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I’d say almost but not quite. 😁 But you’re right, why argue with love? ❤
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This poem is so perfectly phrased, Stew. I agree with Ange that it captures the breathless moment when “being with someone feels less like a quiet conversation and more like a physical force of nature”.
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Thanks Kim! So glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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You’re most welcome, Stew.
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I really like this poem it captures that specific, breathless moment when being with someone feels less like a quiet conversation and more like a physical force of nature🙌
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What a great way to put it. Thank you so much! 😊
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You are very welcome 🩷
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