
Turn away
The silence is better
Than when I held you in my arms
The thunder of your beating heart
With mine
Echoes
In my hollow chest
A bass drum
Without a beat
With you in another’s arms
Turn away
The silence is better
This is for a dVerse prompt: Write a quadrille (a poem of EXACTLY 44 words, not including the title) AND include the word “silence” or a form of the word within the body of the poem. A synonym for silence does not fulfill the prompt. It must be the word, or a form of the word. I hope you enjoy! 😊
Fantastic poem, Stew! That heartache was palpable.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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i felt this poem all the way to my bones
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Emotions cut to the bone. Thank you for reading! 😊
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Anguish beautifully expressed.
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Thank you so much! 🙏🏾
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The loss of love is tough enough…but into the arms of another….silence is better.
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Silence rather than the sound of a love lost. Thank you for reading! 😊
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I like this Stew – it doesn’t just describe heartbreak; it uses sound and the lack of it – to make us feel the physical emptiness of loss ♥️
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Listening to a heart break and the silence after. Thank you so much for reading Ange. 😊
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♥️
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No deeper silence
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The silence of wanting to be alone. Thank you for reading! 😊
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