
The weather warm
The days brighter
Winter’s fingers slacken their grip
Frozen nights leading to icy mornings
No longer upon my doorstep fall
His lips no longer speak my name
Though at one time they did
Sweetest refrains from songs of the heart
But falsetto were his only notes
The sun came up still a little earlier
Yet no warmth did it bring
Winter though its fingers loosened around my heart
Held on with a cold iron grip
This is for a dVerse prompt: For this prompt, write a poem that explores false spring—literally, metaphorically, or both. I hope you enjoy! 😊
Well done, Stew!
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Thank you!😊
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Oh those dishonest notes! Nicely done Stew 👏
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So false! 😊 Thanks Shaun.
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A tender and powerful poem – Jae
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Thanks Jae. Glad you enjoyed it! 😊
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I love this line: But falsetto were his only notes. And love the way winter really held on with an iron grip. Admiring the weaving of the false spring in the relationship and the seasons itself. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you so much! I’m glad that all came through and worked. 😊
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“Sweetest refrains from songs of the heart, but falsetto were his only notes” [ ordinarily I would empathize, however if the falsetto is coming from Barry Gibb, my heart is going to sing and shout!! I enjoyed your poem.
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A Bee Gees fan I see. lol I don’t think the songs were anything like Staying Alive though. 😁 Thanks for the read!
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An enjoyable false spring poem, Stew, I like the personification of winter, with his fingers slackening their grip, yet holding on that little bit longer.
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Thanks Kim. Hopefully winter’s grip has slackened enough for us to wriggle into spring. 😊
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You’re welcome, Stew.
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