
Love me
As I am
As you wish me to be
Love me
As a man
The one of whom you dream
Love me
In the night
When your eyes close
And you dream
And you call out my name
Love me
When no one else will
When the worst is the best I can do
Love me
When it’s a thrill
Exciting and new
Love me
In good and bad
The best we had or ever will
In the dark and light
Morning noon and night
I love you
You must love me
It’s the way things go
The way it must be
Love me
A command I beg
Don’t put the chicken before the egg
Hear this plea
I love you
Love me
This is for a dVerse prompt: Use at least one line in the imperative mood in your poem.
“In poetry and prose, the imperative mood dissolves the barrier between the assumed persona and the reader by its direct address of demand, instruction, or persuasion, …
we English speakers often operate in three grammatical moods which describe the way a verb is used: the indicative, the subjunctive, and the imperative. Simply put, the indicative is a statement/question, the subjunctive is a wish, and the imperative is a demand.”
Hope you enjoy! 😊
Stew, I can see this being set to music. Just think of a world where everyone feels this and reciprocates the same.
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I wish I knew how to write music, I’d love to create some songs. Thanks for reading Li. 😊
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Have you ever tried SUNO? It’s AI but it would give you a chance to see what it would sound like. (fyi this in no way means I advocate for AI music!)
You are welcome.
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The yearning is there declaring deep love.
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The desire to love and be love. Thanks for reading. 😊
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The heart’s cry that every lover knows and feels. Beautifully penned, Stew.
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The yearning for love and acceptance is universal. Thanks for reading Dora! 😊
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This reminds me of teenager/20s thoughts and feelings. Lots of pleading and demands, like someone talking themselves into hope and fear at the same time. Nice write Stew 👏
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That insecure love can be that way sometimes. Thanks for reading. 😊
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Romantic and honest, who could resist, Stew?
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Certainly not me! 😁 Thanks Kim
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I love the light/shade feelings you convey – it makes for an impactful poem – Jae
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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