
River Flow
(after Langston Hughes)
Oh, that I could know that my
Words could combine like a soul
Ballad; one that has
That deep groove, that grown
Ups put the kids to bed, deep
In your feels like,
Damn, make the
Wetness flow like rivers.
Oh yes. I’ve known rivers.
This is for a dVerse prompt: Write a Golden Shovel poem.
So here is the prompt: Write a Golden Shovel poem.
*Choose a line from a poem that resonates with you.
*Build your poem so each line ends with a word from that line.
*Keep the words in order, forming the original line down the right margin.
*Let your poem move in its own direction. Surprise us!
*Include attribution (after [poet])
My Golden Shovel poem is taken from The Negro Speaks of Rivers by Langston Hughes. An excellent poem the line I’ve known rivers is from the poem as well and is repeated along with the line My soul has grown deep like the rivers. I hope you enjoy! 😊
Love the soul ballad from the river. And such a lovely poem for inspiration. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you! I think it flowed well. 😊
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Your poem flows from that line like a river, Ken. Nice one!
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Sorry, Stew, I’m not long up and a bit confused as there’s no NaPoWriMo prompt this morning!
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LOL That’s okay Kim. I’m sure Ken is one heck of a poet.😂
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An interesting take on the prompt. Nicely done!
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Thanks Roth! Glad you enjoyed. 😁
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