
Is it morning?
The start of a brand new day?
Or evening as the day slips away?
Fishermen, a man and his boy
As the tide is low
Boats anchored and moored;
Hardships of a hard life endured.
The light illuminates yet details aren’t clear.
An impressionist influence
Or a realist reaction?
Perhaps the light blinded him
Or the clouds obscured.
Well the sun has risen
Further in the sky.
As the tides go by,
Onward we must fly,
Leaving the boats and fishermen and tides behind.
This is for a dVerse prompt: For today’s Poetics, I would like you all to choose ONE of the paintings above and to write a poem inspired by it. You can write an ekphrastic poem or simply take the title as a springboard or both. The choice is yours.
I chose the painting above. I hope you enjoy! 😊
Your ekphrastic is lovely … I enjoyed it very much!
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So glad you did! Thanks for reading. 😁
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There is always something in a painting that draws us to it. Your poem perfectly illustrates that.
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Thank you. I think that’s true with much of the arts. You just hope the draw is strong enough to draw them in. Thanks for reading! 😊
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Exactly! My pleasure,Stew. 😊
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Asking the right questions is really one I am attracted to
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The questions are the draw. 😊 Thanks for reading.
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A great interpretation of the painting. Morning or evening… that is the beauty of the painting.
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Thank you! A matter of interpretation and perspective. Thanks for reading. 😊
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You are welcome!
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It all comes down to perspective in the end, doesn’t it? I enjoyed the progression of the poem especially; “An impressionist influence or a realist reaction?”
Thank you so much for adding your voice to the prompt ❤️❤️
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Thank you! Good paintings to be inspired by. 😊
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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The rhetorical questions drew me in, Stew, and I enjoyed the brief encounter with the fisherman and his boy.
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Thanks Kim! I think the fisherman and his boy are such an understated part of the painting but gives it a real intimacy and connecting point. Thanks for reading!😊
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You’re welcome, Stew!
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Great piece Stew the strength lies in its evocative blend of gritty coastal imagery with the philosophical reflection on the passage of time ♥️
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Thanks Ange! I picked this painting because it was one of the few “light” ones and I liked the clouds. The real depth of it comes from the coastal imagery though like you say. Thank you so much for reading!😊
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I loved the last lines, “As the tides go by,
Onward we must fly,
Leaving the boats and fishermen and tides behind”
This is a nice takeaway from the painting you selected. Very nice! 💚
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Thank you! And glad the ending worked. 😊
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Enjoyed the questioning throughout this one. It’s about perspective the reader is left to decide Morning or Evening Tide?
The light illuminates yet details aren’t clear
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It fits the painting I think. Definitely light but not detailed. Thanks for reading! 😊
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