A plague on pockets

Pox it! Pox on it all!
I care not what he hides
Beneath his jeans
Next to his thighs.
Put his hand there
Or pull it out.
He hides his money there.
Maybe his time?
Pocket, pffft, whatever;
I know it’s all a lie.
This is for a dVerse prompt: Pen us a poem of exactly 44 words (not counting the title), and be sure to include some form of the word pocket. No need for rhyme, or rhythm, or even reason – unless you choose it. Hope you enjoy! 😊
I got a little carried away with my original poem and forgot it was a quadrille. 😳😂 So, if you’d like a peak at the inspiration for the above quadrille read it below.
Pox it! Pox on it all!
I care not what he hides
Beneath his jeans
Next to his thighs.
Put his hand there
Or pull it out.
Pox it! I shout.
He says he’s cold
So his hand he hides.
Wear gloves, say I.
He hides his money there.
Or maybe his time?
Pox it, pffft, whatever;
I know it’s a lie.
Who would need some small space
Upon their clothes,
If not for something
To keep from wondering eyes?
You don’t see her with some extra space
On her dress or upon her waist.
A proper bag or she goes without.
Just as should be.
Without a doubt.
So pox it. And a pox it within a pox it.
Never shall a pocket darken the clothes I design
Nor will it ever, from any designer of my line.
You did a great job in your trimming of the poem. The Quadrille pockets it all perfectly!!!
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A perfect trim job!!!
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Excellent job turning this into a Quadrille. I love “pox” as well as the pocket! Great take!
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I just wanted an excuse to say pox it instead of pocket. 😁 hehe Thanks for reading.
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This made me laugh, Author Stew! Ha “Pocket, pffft, whatever…” Nice poem and I liked how you were able to condense the original to 44 words, I had to do the same for mine…not an easy task! Much love! 💜
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Yeah I got going and then went back and was Doh! Quadrille. I think it’s funny how different the quadrille is from the orig though mostly the same words and basic idea. Thanks for reading! 😊
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