
Does she love me?
Let me count the ways
One banana, two bananas, THREE Bananas Hahaha!
A Bert and Ernie kinda love, But if they were g
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R
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d
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p
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Keep falling from my head
But that doesn’t mean my eyes will soon be turning
Laaaaady in Red
I don’t think she loves me
That makes me sad
I don’t think she loves me/ Does that make me bad
Bad kitty off the table!
I don’t think those lyrics are right
Mmmm I bet she has a bad kitty
Purrrfect symphony
Humming sweetly from her lips
BAd dog goes Woof woOF
I’m a bad dog
She won’t give me a bone
HOLD ON
The PHONE
IT was Her
SHE SAID SHE LOVES ME
:^)
This is for a dVerse prompt: Write a descort poem incorporating the elements as described above [below].
The writing challenge is to write a descort.
You might experiment with:
*varying line lengths
*changing rhythms or meters
*inconsistent rhyme schemes
*different stanza shapes
*shifts in voice or perspective
*fragments alongside complete sentences
*the use of another language or dialect
*unusual visual arrangements on the page
You don’t need to use all of these techniques, but keep in the mind the key principle: Let the discord mean something.
I hope you enjoyed! 😊
OH WOW!!! This is truly MY KIND of descort!!! Bravo, Bravo.
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Thanks Helen. I aim to please. Hahah. Glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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Fabulous! My wife has ADHD and yes, this feels very familiar!
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Wonderful to hear. I was a bit worried of how it might come across. I’m glad it worked. Thanks for reading. 😁
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Love how well it fits with my thoughts of adhd…
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That was a worry. I’m no expert at ADHD but I went off of what I’d heard from friends and how I thought it might go. Thanks for reading! 😊
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I love love this – words falling down, the music rhythm and fun playful verses specially this one: Purrrfect symphonyHumming sweetly from her lipsBAd dog goes Woof woOF
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Thanks Grace. I was fun throwing that little Haiku in. Glad you enjoyed.
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haha – It looks like you had fun with this one and love that music is thrown in the mix.
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I just let go with it. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading. 😊
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A fun capture of love in ADHD, Stew! I love the idea of a ‘Bert and Ernie kinda love’, gay or not! I love the way you riffed on songs too.
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Thanks Kim. I kind of let the poem go with no guardrails and it wanted to sing. LOL Me, Bert & Ernie thank you. 😁
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You’re welcome, Stew!
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I loved the chaos and light heartedness in this, Burt and Ernie gay? Say it aint so? LOL
Awesome poem! 💚
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Thank you! Hey you never know with Bert and Ernie. LOL
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HA!!
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